The Blog: Switzy Thoughts
Notes from a creative life, with detours into narrative and nonsense.

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Best and Worst of Critique Comments #4
Read more: Best and Worst of Critique Comments #4Reflections on the critique comments I received for a 500-word short story about an unpleasant fellow who wakes up to find his leg amputated and his wife has left him.
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Best and Worst of Critique Comments #3
Read more: Best and Worst of Critique Comments #3Reflecting on a fiction class critique of a medieval-inspired story featuring Maeve, a thief, and her interactions with noble characters. I acknowledge feedback, personal growth, and the balance between confidence and humility in writing.
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The Best and Worst of Critique Comments #2
Read more: The Best and Worst of Critique Comments #2Editor’s Note: This post has been updated for formatting and clarity. Some reflective comments were added in 2025. So we had another full-class critique of short stories. This time, the story had to be 500 words (as opposed to the…
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The Best and Worst of Critique Comments
Read more: The Best and Worst of Critique CommentsEditor’s note: This post has been updated for formatting and clarity. Some reflective comments were added in 2025. I finally got to present my short story to my fiction class, and the comments I received were worth the wait. (I…


